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Mission 7 Prologue Pt 1 by purplekecleon Mission 7 Prologue Pt 1 by purplekecleon
Part 1 of Mission 7 Prologue

For every 40 comments, I'll post the next part an hour sooner (being 6 hours away to start with) - which, I suppose, ultimately could make Mission 7 posted a day or so sooner

You guys sped it up 4 hours! Here's the next part:

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niiohontesha Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
I will comment for the next part! :heart:
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Eolkh Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I just love the way you draw those characters so expressively! And how you cut the dialogs make the rhythmic of the story, the emotions so real! There is only one little thing I noticed on the dialogs scenes principally, concerning the comics rules of narration. It's like in cinema and you may have heard about it : the rule of the 180 degree. To simplify it, if in a scene you show a character on a side of the picture and the other on the other side, even if you change the angle of the view to put the other on the front plan, they must stay on the same side of the picture or the readability of the story would be compromised. You can only change when the characters themselves move in the space... My English is not good so this may be better explanation : [link]
For example, the case 2 and 3 of this page made me wonder if they was two evees or just one.
I hope this could help you! I'm really found of your work, it's an true inspiration!
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Dappleswirl Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't read it :cry:
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BlackRere Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
zoom in, maybe?
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Dappleswirl Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah. Before it didn't zoom. Now it does though :)
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sonic500 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
I love reading your prologue comics.
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Nooknook Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Wow, you've done such a great job on expressions, poses and all Oo Love it! Will it be cleaned and colored some day? :)
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Myufi Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shouldn't "together" in the last panel be "togezer"?

Also, I'm curious about how you organize the panels in your comics.
Do you draw panels first and just work from there? Or do you make them as you go?
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purplekecleon Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Accent mistake, oops! I might fix that later. Thanks!
I draw panels as I go, haha
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