Your explosion is so intense and amazing! And once again, your suspense is well-placed. I'm sure most everyone is eager for the next page, all asking the same question: what lies on the other side of the explosion?
Of course, there might be two sets of missions. One in the present, involving everyone who didn't take part in saving Jasmine, the other part in where Jasmine sents us forward or backward in time involving those involved in rescuing Jasmine and defeating Shade.
Words cannot express... the shear... the shear... It's all just... It's all so... I can't even...
Okay, deep breaths...
My mind was in a constant state of being blown from when PK latched on to Shade with her tongue right until the huge explosion. Talk about an entrance! But man, that was risky, and PK paid for that. Ouch, that's gotta hurt!
The following sequence involving Jasmine and Shade was amazing. I would really see the pain and the terror in her eyes. Perhaps both of their eyes.
Man, I am so excited for the next one now! Gotta find something to do other than refreshing my messages screen to pass the time!
Did anyone else notice her ring can turn invisible as well? No doubt Twig's has some sort of bio-tech engineered into that ring. And thank god that Fresnel is not gone yet, otherwise certain measures might have been taken to keep him in the village. Don't see Charcoal either...weird, you'd think she would be among those who are yelling to Jasmine. Whose teams are those anyways?
Explosions. We all know about them, some of us have experienced them, but one thing that we all seem to forget in spite of that is that they're really, really bad and really, really dangerous and if you're lucky, you'll never be at the center of one.